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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
vampire sex is so hot. this story is the best please update more i need more. you people are gods of fanfiction.
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You updated and i almost missed it!!! NOOO
It was a great chapter. What happens with Marik?? Will he come looking for Ryou? Slaps self* duh, of course he will.
Who will you set up with Malik/? Otigi?? When??? Malik gets no air time. lol Maybe you couyld 3 way him with one of the other couples,. lol
Oh well, I seriously look forward to reading updates on this fic. Great job.
It was a great chapter. What happens with Marik?? Will he come looking for Ryou? Slaps self* duh, of course he will.
Who will you set up with Malik/? Otigi?? When??? Malik gets no air time. lol Maybe you couyld 3 way him with one of the other couples,. lol
Oh well, I seriously look forward to reading updates on this fic. Great job.
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! new chapter ^-^ <3
J-chan
J-chan
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's nice that Mikado knows his brother is alive... but Ryou's stuck in a stable and Marik is lonely! XD He must be wondering, 'Did Ryou drown in the bath?' Lol. I look forward to your next chapter!
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm still absolutely enamored with this story.
*kneels down. presents symbolic bowl.*
Please ma'am. I want some more.
'Ko
*kneels down. presents symbolic bowl.*
Please ma'am. I want some more.
'Ko
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I really like this fanfict, it's great and I love your imagination. However I got two things that you two should know
1. The bible says "Thou shall not give into false testimony against thy neighbor" This simply means that it's a sin to lie against your neighbor or accuse him/her of something you know he didn't do. Lying in itself if not a sin, lying about someone else is though (Also lying for the sake of cruelty is bad also"
2. Please for the love of god spell check your fanfiction. You two keep spelling 'believe' as 'beleive', and not just once but like four times. That's the only grammatical error I see in your writing though, keep up the good work.
1. The bible says "Thou shall not give into false testimony against thy neighbor" This simply means that it's a sin to lie against your neighbor or accuse him/her of something you know he didn't do. Lying in itself if not a sin, lying about someone else is though (Also lying for the sake of cruelty is bad also"
2. Please for the love of god spell check your fanfiction. You two keep spelling 'believe' as 'beleive', and not just once but like four times. That's the only grammatical error I see in your writing though, keep up the good work.
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MUCH happier with this chapter! (Not that the last chapter was poorly written, but it was quite distressing!)
And you're REALLY making me want to hate Seto, and considering that he's my fave YGO character (pimps her own stories), that's saying A LOT!
Major kudos to you for the character of Ahmose. He's definately one of my fave OC characters of all time, in any fandom. Thank you for sharing him!
As usual, I gleefully await the next chapter.
'Ko
And you're REALLY making me want to hate Seto, and considering that he's my fave YGO character (pimps her own stories), that's saying A LOT!
Major kudos to you for the character of Ahmose. He's definately one of my fave OC characters of all time, in any fandom. Thank you for sharing him!
As usual, I gleefully await the next chapter.
'Ko
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you update?? No one else on this site seems to.. hmmm.. TYVM> It was an excellent chapter. I think your story line is very original and for outside characters they are actually nice to have around. Not at all annoying Marysue's.
Great piece of work and a real enjoyable piece to read.
Great piece of work and a real enjoyable piece to read.
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Yami got Ahmose back :) I'm glad. And Mer-Ryou is the cutest |D
I loved it!
I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE :)
Kuro
I loved it!
I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE :)
Kuro
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how to really start this review, so I guess by saying I've spent the better part of April and May re-reading most of you guys' stories, and you guys got me hooked to Bakura/Mikado^^ That is now my fav otp of yugioh^^ And I love this story a lot, though I feel sorry for Yami and Ahmose;_; I hope everything works out ok in the future, and that Ryou would except his elvin half. And that Seto is stopped^_^V