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for He Among Us Without Sin

by hatochiisai

person Anon
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! You're a great writer. Umm...I was just wondering...I don't mean to bug you about it...but I was wondering if you're ever going to continue your story Slave of Destructon? It's really great, so I hope you do. <3
person YamiKuro
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shizzle biscuits!

I liked this chapter....alot.

Love,
Kuro
person Roxas13
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seto is too much of a bastard... I hope Yami fucks him 10ways to nothing with a mile long jaggered edge rusty old sword
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Being a die hard prideshipper, it's VERY hard to watch any version of Seto treating any version of Yami so badly. T_T

That said, please be sure to punish that fucker for every vicious thing that he's done to Yami and Ahmose. In all honesty, I don't even care if you torture him, but I would REALLY like for him to die. Seriously.

Thanks again for continuing this story.

'Ko
person lilly
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
POOR YAMI AND AHMOSE! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha, bloated, somehow I don't think I've ever seen him described in that way before now.
person The Dark Angel
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY YOURE NOT DEAD!!! i was beginning to worry...
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an endearing tale. lol Ok, so now have you decided what you will do with Malik since he was to originally be with Baku?? LOL

Gotta do something with the guy, and Ry needs to be a human again. Surly someone in Vatican city can cancel a curse. That is a priest spell.

Although, he's tougher this way. lolz

Oi, Yami and the 'all powerful sorcerer' are in so much hot water, and Seto, such anevil bastard. lolz
I can't believe you're at 28 chapters already.

See ya on DA
person smalvina
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor Mikado.
person YamiKuro
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
0.o

Holy.

Crap.

Baskets.

Poor Ahmose...and Yami....SO SAD!!