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Yessssssssssssss! A new chapter! Seto was right, Ahmose was brilliant! And what happend with Seto??? I can't wait for the next chappie! Update soon pls!

Hi. Um, I have read your stories for years, and absolutely love your writing. My favorite pairing is Ahmose/Mikado/Otogi. It give me tummy flutters!! Is there any way you could write a lemon with the three of them sometime? I know I'm reviewing on He Among Us Without Sin, but that was the story I was reading when my wish popped back into my head. It's something I've wanted to read for a long time. So, if there's a way you could, in one of your stories, or even in a stand-alone, which would be like quadruply awesome, I would really appreciate it. Thanks, Happy Holidays, and thanks for all your great writing.

From what I read of the first chapter, this is very good and not at all what I was expecting. The only problem I noticed was that Author's Notes were not always marked as separate from the dialogue of the actual story. If I had the attention span, I would probably read more of it. Keep up the good work, and stay literate :)

great chapter and amazing story!! i cant wait to see what will happen to ryou!

Yessss! A new chapter!!! Yami and Ahmose were so cute in this... :) Please next time update sooner! I missed ypour story so much!

OMG!
I absolutly LOVE your story! It's amazing. I come everyday to af.net only to see if you've updated this story! It's brilliant! This chapter was good but I wanted morre angsty things between Ahmose and Seto! X)
Please update very-very soon!

I'm still here, waiting ... patiently? Sort of, hehe.

I LOVED IT!!!!!! Im glad Mikado forgave Bakura ^_^

Love,
Kuro

I'm begging you...

PLEASE leave Yami and Ahmose alone. PLEASE? Pretty please? Sugar on top?

And kill Seto if you would. KTHNX

'Ko

P.S. You know it's bad when you have an avowed Seto fangirl asking you to kill him...

I'm very glad that this fic is so far from finished. I was worried that you would rush the ending, but I'm happy to see that you're spending as much time with the details through this section as you did the last. Thanks for that, because I'd hate to have spent 2 1/2 days reading this fic just to be disappointed or to have it die out without being completed.

Granted, it is a bit overly fluffy for my taste (which *really* surprised me when I read your profile and noticed your age) but it is original, interesting, consistant in it's degree of detail and the time and effort being put into it (it hasn't fizzled out and gotten silly toward the end). I'm quite impressed and am looking forward to the updates. A couple questions though:

1. What was the point of giving Marik the book of Wicca if he and Ryou aren't going to ever use it?
2. Whose idea was it to make Mikado stand in as the dressmaking dummy? Because he was a good, strong (though impetuous), male character up to that point; now he's just a whiny little girlie-man (screaming like a girl? hands up covering his mouth when shocked? the breakdown on the ship?).
3. Isn't Ryou going a bit over the top (ooc) with this whole refusal to discuss his heritage/being hateful thing?
4. Any particular reason why Yami just didn't go to his Mom and tell her what was up? He could easily have come back with an army *for Seto* then had Mom pop in and kick his ass while the army handled his followers.
5. I can see Itemri getting pissed off about Bakura hanging out with a little bitch, but what brought him into this realm to begin with? Why would someone of his age and power give a rat's ass about the Vatican in another realm? That kind of request, even coming from the *childish and inexperienced* prince of his current realm, would be beneath someone like Itemri. And, he didn't find out about Bakura's involvement (Itemri's only legitimate reason for caring) until after he arrived.
6. Are we ever going to find out what this thing is that Seto's wearing, where it came from, how he ended up with it? and finally,
7. Where the hell is Jounouchi?