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O_O That was the worse cliffhanger! He can't die ;-; So I leave a review! Damn update soon, that chapter was so good.

oh my god please update. you cant kill anyone off pleeeeeease. i love all of your stories. please update soon.

Excellent story. Ryou's such a cute character. When's Seto going to appear though? He's my favorite YGO character, so I'm looking forward to his entrance into the story. Please update soon! ^.^

It's going to be wierd if Malik is not being an ass anymore. I can't wait to see how he is going to act now! Keep up the brilliant work!

SEE!! there had 2 b a reason y malik was acting lik such an asshole. if there wasn't i'm sure u would've finally lost your cool wit him. i would hav finally lost my cool wit him 2. mariks baptism was really nice....funny pero nice. yo no se....baptisms bring u closer 2 God pero it doesn't always change a person. i mean marik is who he is and i do find it kind of wrong that ryou's kinda ENFORCING his religion on him. i mean Marik accepted the baptism pero ryou looks at it as a way 4 marik 2 be a better person or a sinless soul. first of all marik was a better person without being baptised and second of all ryou should kno as a priest that all creatures on earth, even him, r not born without sin. so in other words we will always b evil sinful creatures and the only hope we have is that God would forgive us. ANYWAY, strayin away from that subject....every1's gonna meet in the next chappie! i just kno it! i can feel it in my bones. i just wonder wats gonna happen when they do meet. and i hope malik would b OK now. if not then i'll just have to set oprah lose on him so she can feed ( i've been using oprah to theaten my freinds lately and it always works. now i'm honestly startin 2 think people r truly afraid of her). i can't wait till the next chapter in which i kno shit will happen!!!

Much Luv From Nyc~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

Aww bless Marik! Well done with this chapter. I look forward to the next! xx

Ok. U’ve now given me complete licence 2 go and murder malik. HOW COULD HE B SUCH AN ASSHOLE!! Is there a reason? No..really….is there. I mean no one and I mean NO ONE just goes from being kind and whateva (according to marik) to being a complete lard ass without a reason. So by making malik such a zit in the ass, u have given me licence 2 fuckin kill him off. MUHAHAHAHAHA!! No I won’t. I still luv him. Anyway, I hope Mikado’s gonna b ok. I fell kinda sorry 4 him. And I c marik has a lil some’in some’in 4 ryou. Rrrrr. He’s such a sweetheart. Marik & ryou. Now I will ask the question that plagues me o so much: WHEN’S EVERYBODY GONNA MEET???? Please. I must kno. Neways, can’t wait 4 the next update.

Much Luv fROM nyc~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

I loved the chapter and I love this story so far I just have one issue and it's not just for this but for a lot of your newer fics; Ryou cooing happens way too often, and it just seems very much out of character. You don't have to pay attention to this, I just thought I'd point it out because it is slightly annoying o continually read 'Ryou cooed' or 'Ryou said cooing' and such.

OMFG!! i wanna kill marik and malik!! i've never really wanted to do that to them before but now... let's just say i feel like getting my peoples u kno wat i'm saying. neway.. i really like this story so far but i wonder.. is everyone gonna meet? when? how? why? please do tell!! i can't wait till the next update.

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

You DAMN RIGHT YOU'RE GONNA GET A SHIT LOAD OF REVIEWS 4 THIS!!! IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME!! it was definetly worth it 4 mallychan to give in. i feel so giddy now!! how!! finally an ahmose/yami. i really like this fic so far and for some reason i keep thinkin about dante's inferno. i don't kno, i really like that book. i think dante has a sick mind. anyway this fic was a great way 2 start off the new year. it's brand spankin' new and i sure as hell kno it's gonna b good cuz u'r writing it of course con mallychan. the only problem i have with this fic so far is that BAKURA'S NOT IN IT!! where's my husband? and wat r the pairings? anyway besides that this fic is good and i can't wait 4 the next chappie!!

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN