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for He Among Us Without Sin

by hatochiisai

person meijimistress
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i am so sorry to not review as often as i should. i really do love all of your stories and i will review from now on after every update just please dont kill anyone off. i love them all. your stories are always the best.
person Chibigeemu
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanna see Yami do his little trick, that's gotta be one hell of a joke! Yay they all met!
person TheBlackCatsLuck
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. One thing that amuses me is the conversation between you two as you write left in the story. I'm guessing it was written via roleplay or something. XD Since the random OOC comments are littered through the story. Why is that?
person Sairene
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't thin you will kill off your creation just for reviews. So far the story is interesting. I like the way you are blending chacaters together and throwing out the rules on religon with Ahmose and Yami. I kinda like Malik being an ass. It amuses me to a point. I am waiting for him to get his ass beat.
person punk_llama
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally! everyone meets! and you cant kill Ahmose.... youd have like, a billion crazy people on your ass for it.
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please dont kill Ahmose!!! This is sooooo addicting I could kill myself! (not literally). I cant wait to read more of this. It's about time they crossed paths.
person The Dark Angel
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T-T NO!!!!! DONT KILL AHMOSE!!!!! I REVIEWED!!!! DONT KILL AHMOSE!!!!!!!
person blackdragon
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!!!! HE cant die!, please dont make him die.
* Puppy dog eyes *.
person devil child
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'Explain! What is love!?' he peeped in command. 'I demand to know!', that was my favorite line.Also DON'T LET AHMOSE DIE!!!! Great story, please update soon.
person Drago
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! No! Don't kill Him!!!! Please I love this story I reviewed! Please keep writing!