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for He Among Us Without Sin

by hatochiisai

schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is great so far? Does Yami's world have like a particular name?
person Siarene
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute Yami got mad just cause Ahmose was overwhelmed by everything. Still a little tight assed anit he. Good chapter. I love the parts with Yami and Ahmose.
person Chibigeemu
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah Marik's bath is probably my favorite part in this chapter. XD This is getting really good. Love it!
person Yaoilover16
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy fucking shit! This is awsome! I just started reading it today and I LOVE IT!!! The couples are great... and despite the fact that Bakura is much older, he and Makato [sorry if I spelt his name wrong] should get together. I hope you come out with more soon and that no one dies! ^_^ Lots of love and yaoi-ness!

YL16
person Chibigeemu
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving Yami's tricks. XD It's my favorite part.
person lokivsanubis
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanna hear more about the dress thing, sounds like a fun story. The love potion thing was very very interesting. But i wanna see Malik not trying to kill people or being an ass whole again. And i really want to see some Ryou on Marik action like soon. I'll be so happy when you review again and stop with the teasing and give us a kiss between Ryou and Marik already so Ryou can run around screaming he's sinning and needs to be punished. UPdate soon!
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic, i'm surprised you haven't got more reviews, because your writings great and so imaginative. Anyway, love the little bit with Yami and Ahmose, that was so funny, please update soon, can't wait to read it.
Rae
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person Blackdragon
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeay!! He did not die!! He did not die!! (jumping up and down)
He he, Yami is sneaky, love potion... Good Work!
update soon!
person Drago
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what part Seto plays in this story! Although I bet he ends up being a bad guy.... Oh well....
Keep up the good work!
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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