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Very action packed chapter! Things really heat up. YOU HAD BETTER BE SHITTIN' ME ABOUT YAMIS DEATH!!!!! If not...well, no cookies for you.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! Yami might be anoying but you can't kill him!!!!!

The pups sound cute though....

WHAT THE FUCK?!!! HOW COULD KILL YAMI IN T

D: It's tempting! That -was- heartbreaking! How could you? ;-;

I hope Yami comes back, and that Ryou gets over his hatred of elves.

Okay! I just thought that the demon realm had a name that I had missed or something. Awesome chapter! Will Yami be coming back or is he done for the rest of the story?

What! uhh yami is sutch an idiot! just leaving him like that.
well I hope he will come back.
anyway the story is great as allways, so keep wrighting.
chiao

AWWWW!!! WAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT CHAPTER?!!!! OMG I CAN'T WAIT!!! the part with bakura throwing everybody out of the carriage at 'the ass crack' of dawn.......HILARIOUS!! and the whole bite me scene was jus priceless. i really feel sorry 4 ahmose though. but seriously, after a year of being 2gether, yami should have a lil more faith in ahmose not 2 hurt him. the fact that he jus kinda said 'i'm not wanted good-bye' was lame. he should seriously kno ahmose by now and the fact that he was never really accepted by EVERY1 never seemed to bother him much be4. i wonder if he's coming back though. and wat the hell was the "evil presence" that bakura and ahmose was talking about. u must elaborate on it next chapter so that my curiosity may be quenched.

Much Luv From Nyc~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

Aw! What happened to Ahmose and Yami was so SAD! Made me sad too. But the rest of the story was awesome as always.

Awww! How cute! Yami and Ahmose are all curled up and being lovey dovey... sooo cute!!! Keep up the great work!!!!