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(Mob slowly puts down pitchforks and flaming torches and their leader steps forward) Ah, Yamis alive... We can all go home now. (Pitchforks disappear and calm loving fans return).

I'm so happy Yami's not dead. I mean i would have died if he was dead, he's so funny. I'm also loved how you has Ashmose stare at his pillow and seemingly 'talking' to himself in front of Dartz and Peg"ass"us. Man he's such an up tight jerk. Anyway... The Marik and Ryou shopping was cute. Hope you update soon, but should anyone else have a sudden slip (torches ready the be lit).

Update soon!

thank u for not completely killing Yami... i was seriously about to cry... and tell Ahmose i said "Welcome to the Dark Side!!!" which the Dark Side being insanity... i have paperz to PROVE im crazy... seriously... not kidding... *manical laughter*... i should really write that book report now... i dont want to though... T-T will u do it for me? Mythology by Edith Hamilton?

That was awesome. Ahmose talking to Yami reminded me of the movie "drop dead Fred" I dont know if that's where you got the idea from but it was great!

Just finished reading the first couple of chapters. Really love it so far.

OMG!! u r so evil. i jus finished reading full moon and i was all happy cuz no one died. NOW I GO BACK TO THIS AND GUESS WAT....SOME1 EFFING DIES!!! YAMI OF ALL PEOPLE!! DOSHITE!!! why do u do this. now needed my kleenex for this one RIGHT WHEN I WAS ABOUT TO PUT EM AWAY!! man that was so sad. i wasn't expecting that. did i ever tell u that seto was a bubble blowing bastard? well, if i didn't tell u be4, now u know. he's a bubble blowing bastard (try saying that 10 tymes really fast).an i don't think i like the people in tha vatican either. no not at all.now who's gonna be the comic relief/nymphomaniac in the story? o man i can't wait 2 c wat you're gonna do in tha next chappie. cuz i jus KNOW ahomose is not about 2 let his man go like that. all hell's breaking loose next chappie i jus know it.

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

... NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! HOW COULD U?????? WHAT DID YAMI EVER DO TO YOU????? plz tell me he returnz from the dead!! if he dont, Hato, as much as i heart u, i may be forced to kill u... T-T ima cry forever now... first Ahmose almost diez, now Yami really diez... T-T noooooooooo...

The Dark Angel

*cries* Yami can't die! Noooo! What a mean, mean point to leave the story at. But you write it so well. I look forward to reading the next chapter. ^_^ xxx

You killed off yami?! *throws plastic sunkist bottle* This is not cool!!!! Please tell me he's in a coma or something...great chapter otherwise.

I'm gonna CRRRYYYYYYYY!!!!
YAMI!!!!!! how sad *sniff* I can't wait for next chapter please don't let things finnish like this!

NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! You killed Yami!!!!! *cries*