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oh god this story just keeps getting better. please update i love all of ya'll's stuff. i really want you to update. pleeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!

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love your story

wow...I got alittle behind in my reading, but now that I have caught up, I wanted to tell you guys that this story still rocks!

"and like clockwork, the first confession was always the same... cursing..." -HAHAHAHAHA i think i loughed like 15 minuts cuss of that line aloun! ^^ I loved this chap! And i can't wait till the next one! ^^ Pleas update soon! (why does Ryou hate his haritege so mutch? was it cous of his fathere? an erm i know i sound stupid but Mikados charekter is based on Jou right?)

Well, this could be interesting...Pegasus talking with Yami. Can't wait to read it...

o man that chapter was good. i really want 2 kno y ryou won't talk about his heritage. y does he hate it so much.it's not that bad. HE SHOULD EMBRACE IT!! elves r cool. well at least I think elves r cool. mayb it's cuz he's been told since he was little that elves were bad pero he shouldn't think that jus becuz they told him that. and wat did he mean when he was talking 2 marik about choosing between tha thing he luvs and the one he luvs. now i kno he's gonna stay wit marik no matter wat. he better. *cracks knuckles* and u kno until i almost got to the end of the chappie, i wanted 2 rip off pegesus' heart pero now, i sorta lik him. sorta. i can't wait till the next chappie when he and dartz interview yami. IT'S GONNA B SOO FUNNY!!! omg i'm already jittering wit excitement!!

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

i LOVED chapter 11. im soo glad that this chapter was soo funny coz lately there has been quite a lot of doom and gloom ^^
i cant wait to see what else Yami will do now that hes a ghost... Ahmose really will get sent to the room with soft walls in the end, will he also get one of the special jackets that do up at the back? XDDD
i think out of courtesy Pegasus should let Ahmose keep the pillow coz it really looks like hes become attatched to it XDD

cant wait for another chapter, love all your stories soo keep on writing them ^^ (thats an order XD)
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yaey! yami is back (jumping up and down).
not nice to run after someone els. bad yami
good work

It's nice to see Ahmose make a fool out of himself once in awhile. XD Marik and Ryou are so cute too!

YAY yami's back!!!!....well sorta.now all ahmose has to do is 2 get yami a new body and BAM he's back. AND MARIK WENT SHOPPING!!! this is a happy day and i seriously don't feel like myself rite now. i hate the flu. the vatican suck ass and i luv the way yami can still b a pain in the ass even after he's dead. any way i don't have the energy 2 leave a long review cuz i really don't feel good, but i jus wanted to say that i really liked this chappie and that i can't wait 4 tha next one.

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN