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for He Among Us Without Sin

by hatochiisai

schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeay, this chapter was really good, its nice
that they found a way to be together for a long time.
update soon.
bye
person T
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories! All of them really. I didn't know if I could leave a review because I'm not registered on the site but I thought I'd give it a try today. Don't ever stop writing, I get so excited when I see a new chapter up or you've started a new story. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter!

person Zaile
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't feel neglected!! We all love you!!
By the way... Bakura is so CUTE!!!! ^^
I was like "AAAWWWWW" at the end of the chapter hahhaha
can't wait for next update
person smalvina
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't feel neglected, we love your story
person MewMew2
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I love this fanfic. It's an absolutle masterpiece of written work! Please continue this when you have the chance. (As well as the other fanfic Slave of destruction)please. Thank for writing and posting this.
person smalvina
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!
Love it
Love it
Love it
Bakura was great
the rest were great 2
person Silverwolfe
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Yami is dying and Pegasus is doing nothing!! That fruity bastard! he should get raped by a camel! But....is there another sequel to Twilight Manegerie?? YOU GOTTA PUT ONE UP IF THERE IS!!
person Tasha
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting chapter! I am glad that you guys picked the Mikado and Bakura pairing though...and nothing works out like we plan these days...but this did work out for the best.
person smalvina
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow
please write more bakura scenes
person The Dark Angel
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yay ur back! i was getting worried! and excellent chapter! i think my favorite by far!! im happi, yay!!!