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for He Among Us Without Sin

by hatochiisai

person The Dark Angel
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome chappie! good luck!
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
those fictional bastards! and good luck with your trip
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want MORE! And good luck at your resort! I hope you do well! and see, I'm reviewing! I'm really glad Mikado and Bakura FINALLY got together and it's looking pretty good for Ahmose and Yami too. Te he he, Yami's the demon king! Well demon prince, but that still makes him even sexier than he already was! I eagerly await more, and really truly hope that Ryou comes to his senses soon and not only finally plays with Marik, but gets over his elf prejudice and realizes that elves are wonderful, WONDERFUL beings. A unicorn would NEVER approach ANYTHING that had evil in it, it trusted him so fast BECAUSE he had elf in him! He needs to face facts! ELVES ARE GOOD!
person smalvina
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter

"Let he among us without sin cast the first stone... "
Now where did I hear that before ;)

Good luck at the weight loss resort, please tell me if it helped .

smalvina
person Zaile
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bye Bye!!
We will miss you. Good Luck!!
Can't wait for next chapter :P
person The Dark Angel
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this chappie ended way too soon... but then again i may just be a fast reader... hurry with the next chappie, i have to kno what happenz! ur writing is soooooooooo addictive!!!!!
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't been online for two weeks and when I get back, you've posted new chappies! Hooray! I'm glad I got to catch up, I like your work soooo much! both of you do such a great job, I love being hooked on your writing. see you again soon!
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter..I can't wait for the next one
person Chibigeemu
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been horrible with the reviewing but I still love this story. It's so sweet what Ahmose was willing to do!
person The Dark Angel
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
vampire Ahmose? thatz hot! oh God i sound like Paris Hilton! *runs off in search of Ryou so he can cleanse her* UNCLEAN UNCLEAN!!!