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for He Among Us Without Sin

by hatochiisai

schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that was very awesome..... I love all your stories that you have written so far... now I am on to read the sequel.... keep up the good work
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome!!! I love the work you did with this!!!

By the way, if you like this type of stuff, check out my story, "Castlevania: Dracula's Laments." It's nowhere NEAR as good as this, but still....
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ummm... Needs more Bakura.
person hitachiintwinlover
schedule October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ssssssssssoooooooo...can i rate this story a 5 like 50000000000 times?? HAHAHA! the plotline was awesomely original, and the characters were consistant despite the length of the story. there was true character growth and a dose of reality in the amount of time passage, not one of those "and then a miracle occurred and three weeks later, he completed a task that most complete in three years!" now that this story is over i'm not sure what i'm going to do!! AHAHAHA!!! definitely one i looked forward to reading every time!! so the "cast the first stone" is a sequel to this?? because what is going to happen to those in the crystal??? or will they just remain there??? ANYHOO!! ABSOLUTELY LOVE!! thanks so much!!
~hitachiintwinlover
person Velvetina
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh it's been such a long time since I was on AFF and even longer since I've read anything in this fandom but I'm so glad that I came back and stumbled onto your fics again. It's been far too long. I've re-read all of your fics now, apart from the Jungle series which I am saving, and have been having a wonderful time. There's a couple I'm hoping for a sequel one day but I guess I'll have to wait and see.

I'm enjoying this one so very much, I love the dynamic between Bakura and Mikado that you write and it's always amusing to watch them bicker. I do worry about what Bakura's sire is going to do next but I do know it's going to be kickass. Poor Ryou, he has so many issues and I am assuming that being a werewolf as well now won't help - though maybe it will. Who knows, I guess that is a wait and see sort of thing. I actually feel pretty sorry for Malik who is the loner of this piece so far but I am glad that going back to his village has helped him. I bet Ahmose is going to do something pretty seriously awesome soon and then Yami will screw him silly no matter where they are.

Also, I know it was a while ago in the fic but that Dartz torture/flirting made me die with laughter. He is a sexy sexy man!
person Kiki
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Thanks for the fast update! I missed Seto from the chapter I can't wait to know what happend with him! Maybe his back to normal? I would miss the evil Kaiba! :D And what about Ahmose? What his up to? Conbtinue!!!!!!!!!!
person Yami Bakura Itemri
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn!!! And you cut it off RIGHT there. >.< EVIL!!!
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another wonderful chapter! Poor Ryou is now a werewolf... So does that mean he is not any part human or is it like 1/4 wolf, 1/4 human, and 1/2 elf? I cant wait to see what will happen next!
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
>.> So while randomly washing dishes at work I came upon a quandary, what would happen if your characters from this fic meet the characters from the wild?

J-chan
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Though I love Seto as a character normally, I originally worried that I would hate what you've done with him. Instead, I've found that you have created a truely evil being in his form and I love you for that!

Ooooo! This is SO yummy! I can't WAIT to see what happens next!!

'Ko

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