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Please tell me there will be a lemon in the next chapter...b/c I would love that.

That was some confession on Ahmose's part. XD All I can say is that I loved this chapter just like the others. ^_^ Things are getting nerve racking though!

Can't wait to see what happens next! I was reading this a while ago when it only had 3 chapters and came back and was reading through the fics in you profile and noticed that this had more added to it. Needless to say, I was VERY happy! When you add more to this, do you think you can send me an email with the web address to let me know? Thanks.

i think that you have writing a great story and I'am weighting for the next part i love it






Love and peace

This story is getting better and better by the chapter! I can't wait for the rest.

The part about Marik asking Seto to kiss his butt was quite funny! Seto quickly became an asshole in this chapter. I'm too addicted to this story. Every chapter keeps me guessing. Well, I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Love the story please update soon

hey there i really like your story. Its great. what i think would really make this story better though is if you make it a long story something like 20 chapters would be good. it is a lot but its just sooooo good that i want it to last long, and by the way the whole isea of werewolves and yugioh is GENIUS. keep up the great work.

Yeah... alive and kicking! Ryou is deceptive, I guess. In this chapter he shows that he isn't as... clueless?... as he sort of came off as being from the start. How he broke off ties with Marik was really hurtful and not being totally honest with either Marik or himself. It shouldn't have been a big surprise that Marik would then go and attempt to take out the competition. The moping and whatnot by Marik... I was reminded of Marik's behavior in The Jungle. He's really a mess now that Ryou has shunned him and after Ryou in a crappy and somewhat spineless way confessed feelings of love while walking out of the butcher shop. It's gonna get ugly here and soon!

PERO HE DOES NEED 2 FUCK A DOORKNOB!!! GOD HE'S A FUCKING TURD!!! neway this was a spankin good new chapter. i really like it. it was tha bombnest. the only question i hav is y ryou came home @ 2 in tha morn from Seto's casa? wat was that boy doing? or should i say WHO was he doing.... ugg i really hope nothing happened. and i was a lil upset @ ryou in this chapter. i mean i understand marik's in love wit him and all pero if i was marik, i think i really would have killed ryou in the butcher place. Yo no se, i don't hav patience for that kind of attitude. he was really cold. i have a bad temper and all, so i really had the need 2 punch ryou out in this chappie. i love ryou and u'r doin a REALLY good job at making me wanna not like him. i'm also kinda wondering when ahmose is finally gonna overthrow the dick wad. i mean i kno that he wants 2 wait till he's 21 pero COME ON....18 is more than enuff. some1's gonna die if he doesn't do it fast... and knowing u, u'd probably put ryou on the brink of death in the next few chappies cuz u r SOOOO evil lik that. lol. neway.... CAN'T WAIT TILL UPDATE!!! YAY!!!

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