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for Full Moon

by hatochiisai

person devil child
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so fuckin funny with the females, so does that mean there be some smut on the boat? I can't wait for the fight scene!!!
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more more i need more i wait for this story ever week to read more and all i can say is that my little wolf needs to remeber his man i dont now maybe Yami hit him on the head and he remmbers


P.S LOVE AND PEACE
person Menacingk
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I reached a point where I really just wanted to smack Megumi. It was the same as I felt when the whole issue with the gay penguins was happening. And I'm excited about the next chapter, Ryou smex!!! Loved this one!
person Jeda
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*crawls through bedroom window in2 said bedroom* i'm back. i went 2 brazil.I braved flying tortillas, the amazon, short guyz in sombreros, and oprah all on a llama and in a humvie. my next destination is japan and then THE WORLD!! anyway..... i was thinking that THIS was the chapter. at the beginning, i took a deep breath and i was lik 'o boy here we go' pero instead i got the 'calming be4 tha storm' which is even worse becuz now i'm making predictions. i'm think 1)ryou will die 2)ryou would get severely hurt and lose his memory all over again 3)ryou will become mentally impaired 4) after the fight he will be stalked by oprah....4EVER!!! or 5) all of the above. i dunno. somethin's gonna happen 2 ryou and i kno becuz u jus luv 2 toture that kid. Pero anyway, this was a really good chapter. i like marik and ryou's escape and the whole horny female thing. it was mad funny. i also want 2 point out that every tyme marik mentioned 'do the nasty', i had this incredible urge 2 do tha hustle. i kno it's wierd pero i couldn't help it. anyway, i can't wait till the next chapter. i DEFINETLY kno somethings going down in this chapter. i hope everyone (except takeru and his groupies) come out with all their limbs intact. i'm not expectin ryou to. even if he does live and only suffers a few scratches, i'm jus gonna get myself ready just in case he doesn't. *gets out a box of kleenex*

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
person Willowsnight
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love love it you are just great you have to write more
person devil child
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*still crying* your stories always cause me to cry but I love reading them, can't wait for the next chapter
person Drago
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Marik and Ahmose make it through okay. I am really enjoying this story. I think it is funny that in this story Ryou has forgotten Marik, while in TM Marik forget Ryou. Keep you the good work!.
person Daizu
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah..
At the end of chapter 8 I thought, Ryou wouldnt forget Marik and the others and he would try to get away from that island.
But then I read Chapter 8 and get really(!) pissed off of him. He hurt Marik so much and he starts to get annoying to me.
Hopefully there is a change in the next chapter =)
Whatever happens, I wouldnt stop read your very NICE stuff!

Rock on!
person Chibigeemu
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like I said before, this fic is awesome! Bakura makes me sad though D: even though that's his character. Hehe Hunter Moon is making me excited I can't wait ^_^
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This whole chapter got sadder and sadder by the line. Bakura's an ass and I hope he dies.