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for Full Moon

by hatochiisai

person Jeda
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my best friend's going out wit a really HOT brazilian guy. therefore, she has a major obsession wit brazilians and it's spreading fast. one of my friend's is also brazilian. o yeah. i'm cool wit them. they're all hot. anyway so when i was going into this chappie i was nervous as hell. so i decided 2 skip it and go to 'He Among Us Without Sin' then i decieded 2 skip that one and come back 2 this. yeah. that's how nervous i was. but luckly i DIDN'T need my kleenex as u hoped. cuz everything went fine. YAY!! ding dong and cheerio!! sing it high. sing it low. ding dong, the wicked bastard's dead!! <.< i sang nothing....so how long is bakura gonna remain a bastard.i mean, he's always a bastard but here he's an annoying bastard. he's my husband and all pero he's starting to get on my nerves. he need to accept ryou. it's like accepting nutella in2 your life. if u taste it and get use 2 it, u will luv it. i LUV yami and his BB gun. yami's the greatest. that was madd hilarious. anyway, i can't wait till tha next chappie. i hope bakura would b able 2 accept ryou by the next chappie. i do have one question though. will ryou ever get really agressive 2 tha point were he scares just about every1? that'll be awesome 2 c him tear apart some1 he doesn't like with not just brute but words. i luv an agressive ryou. anyway, HAPPY EASTER!! :)

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
person Jeda
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
for some wierd reason my whole review was cut in half. anyway i'll just finish where it cut off. so how long is bakura gonna be a bastard. i mean he's always a bastard but here, he's an annoying bastard. he need's 2 accept ryou. it's like accepting nutella in2 your life. at first u may think u don't like it but after u give it a taste u fall completely in luv wit it. i luv yami and his BB gun. Yami is jus the best. that whole part with the BB gun was hilarious. i do have one question though....will ryou ever show an aggresive side now that he's a werewolf? i don't kno i jus think an aggresive ryou is a hot ryou. anyway. i can't wait till tha next chappie and i hope bakura becomes nicer 2 ryou by tha next chapter and HAPPY EASTER!! :)

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
person Drago
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I think it would be cool to see echarters drawn in their wolf, and halway forms. Ryou would be sooo cute!!!! I bet Yami would be cute if he gets turned.
person menacingk
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You don't know about the gay penguins? They were in some big zoo. Several male penguins paired off and began nesting together and displaying mate behavior. They tried introducing females and only one of the males switched. They even talked about splitting up the male couples for the longest time, but were eventually talked into letting them stay together. Then the male couples all took rocks and put them in their nests and treated them like eggs. The zoo people switched the rocks for eggs and they are raising little baby penguins! Little gay penguin parents. http://www.jrn.columbia.edu/studentwork/cns/2002-06-10/591.asp
person Chibigeemu
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I loved it. XD Really exciting. Ahmose at the vet was a good funny ending.
person willowsnight
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i need more Please please you need to update soon (sad look in eye i miss my little pup ) so update soon
person PleiadesWolfe
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So I finally read your update and to my surprised you had two. I should really be doing my homework, but I needed a break. This is about over isn't it? :( I'm looking forward to the battle though. I hope nothing too bad happens to our gang of wolves. I don't really care if anything happens to the dad and his posse. I feel kind of bad for saying that but the dad deserves it for what he has done.
person Drago
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The next chapter is going to be good! I can tell. THe hunter's moon and Ryou bitching he wants sex, how can it be worse?

Oh yea...Ahmose could die....Please don't kill him! *give puppy dog eyes*
person Chibigeemu
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man I can't wait until next chapter! Nerve racking. XD
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am dying to see how this turns out! You guys have to end this one with the biggest bang ever!!!