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for Full Moon

by hatochiisai

schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awesome story.... it actually brought tears to my eyes in a few places.....again awesome story
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Waahhh! What happened? You broke Ahmose. How could Yami leave Ahmose like that, he's devastated. Is he still messed up from what those thre %%$@## did to him? I know he didn't exacty have a true pack mentality but to just leave - poor Ahmose. I'm typically a Yami/Yugi or Seto/Jou fan and don't usually like OC's with either Yami or Yugi but I absolutely loved Yami and Ahmose together they were so funny and sweet. Please tell me there is a sequel in the works with a better ending for these two. please pretty please (gives puppy eyes ala Yugi).Great writing, couldn't stop reading, loved all of it (barring the final chapter - pouts)I read this whole fic in one night. Question also about Millinium Balance - I saw a note about it at the end of "Koibito Yami" but it isn't posted. Do you have it posted on another site? If you have time to let me know the email is paulaculp71@hotmail.com.
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
is dat it?
i love dis but will u b makin a sequel?
pls say u will
person YamiKuro
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!? YOU JUST END IT?!?! JUST LIKE THAT!?!

MOOOOOOOOORE!

Please? Even a short one more?
person adrian
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was such a sad ending! :( could u please make another chapter~! one about them staying together and yami never leave! please! email me with your response! thanx
btw i love your stories!
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.o...wait end?!? but...he's sad and yami just left?? **pout** So confused
J-chan
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was such a sad ending!!!
person Victor Violet
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. Great as usual. The only real problem I had was the word coo seemed a bit overused.

On another note, please tell me there is going to be a sequel. I hated how it ended. There was no clean ending and it made you feel like it was only the first half of the story. I beg of you to continue this. You'd make lots of people really happy. Including me of course which is most important *puffs up arrogantly before being pricked with a needle and rapidly deflating*. LOL

I hope to see many more of your stories in the future. Ja ne!

Victor Violet
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Up to your usual yummy standards as usual. But but but...there is going to be a sequel right? I almost cried at ahmose's pain. Yami and him are like my absolute fav pairing. It can't just end like that...right? Plzzzzzz make a sequel. Love y'all
person Mei Zamiel
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No! Just no! it can't end there!!!! it just can't!!! *cries*