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for The Miracle Mutt

by MizumiBlu

person kisa
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness........did jou just bet on seto?.oh this is gettin so intresting....god jou never loses e bet.he is stubbern ....cool now whatever you do don't let kaiba to find about this bet....if he falls for jou and then fainds about this bet..he's gonna think this was all a game to our blondie.....god somebody give me some water.i'm burning here.....
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
xD really? can't wait either. ^__^

seto- haha, fooled you moki
mokuba- seto i don't get the exploding chestnut thing
seto- O/////o
jou- nehehe? um...ya dun need ta know dat
mokuba- *pouts* ...fine i'll just read it for myself
me- I wonder who'll end up with the candy cane looking vibrator? ?:} togi maybe? hehe >>
seto- he might just enjoy that a little too much
me- i did not need to know that thank you

person Passing Reader
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Mokuba dont eat them!!! =p
Ah ,the irony, love how this chapter ended, That was a great intresting stash lol!
I love the way you portray Kiba, thou the real Kiba would probibly never act this way, is good to see him portrayed diffrently ;p
person SilverCrescentX (not logged in)
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was nice enough to review!!!!! i loved it!!!! and u havent updated in a long while!!!! *pout* but then again i cant say anyhting....neither have it....oh well i loved ure new ficcie!!! it's a adorable!!!! i cant wait for lemons though! *gleams* Ya! Merry Belated Christmas and a late New Years!!!!
person Lazulai
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know Mizumi, there is something fundamentally fucked up about Mokuba eating a chocolate penis. >>; It sort of scares me. I'm going to have nightmares now. I'll pull a Ron Weasley and wake up screaming "NOOO! THE CHOCOLATE PENIS IS TRYING TO MAKE ME EAT NUTS! I DON'T WANT TO EAT NUTS!"

...anyway.

Another loverly chapter. I wonder what exactly Kaiba will do with the present he got from our puppy. Do I perhaps sense some kinkyness in the future? ::Drools:: The image of Kaiba running out onto his lawn as a 60-year-old chasing carolers off his lawn made me laugh. Really hard. It woke my boyfriend up. >>; He was not happy. (And I do feel inclined to mention that he and I live in a really..."preppy" neighborhood that goes ALL out decorating for Christmas. The lights on our street rival the Vegas strip, I'm tellin' ya. And he and I are not so into that sort of thing. Our house is the only one without lights and wreaths and big blow-up Santas and snowmen on the lawn. >>;)

And you made Seto cry! Seto crying has always been an interesting image in my mind, it's so hard to picture properly. ><;

Oh well. Looking forward to another chappie SOON!
person girlo
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHH! I've been glomped! Oh well, I'm sure I survived, or my ghost can type... Anywhoo, poor Seto, all crying and being depressed and stuff. I need chocolate (I'm a very empathic person... and am hungry) I can't wait to read more!
person Velvetina
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
**Holds tight** Too long, sweetie, far too long!!! I've been okay, lifes been busy but generally okay though I'm still going to the hospital regulary, bleh **rolls eyes** How about you?! And don't worry about not responding, I know exactly what you mean about meaning to do it and then it all somehow gets left behind lol. **Snugs** I love you too. :-D

**Blush** Aww, thankies, I was ~so~ surprised to be nominated! It made my new year, though compared to the other writers nominated I'm not holding my breath that I'm going to win anything. They are all fantastic writers that I'm up against. The WCCC is a really fun challenge, I meant to do it last year but just didn't have time... I still have the bunny though!

Hee, a wonderful fic like this is never wasted, even though you didn't make it in time its still loved by the group and obviously on here as well which is fantastic!

person seto'swifey
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story so far. I'm looking forward to reading more.
person LadyVirgo1956
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh i loved it Otogi getting the lump of coal in a stocking and the look on Jou's face is priceless when Seto opens up his gift to find a very racy advent calendar. That teacher is just too syrupy for her own good. Loved it all can't wait for more and if i can think up a good idea i might enter it too. Not holding my breath there is one they will have later that interests me more though. Update soon. Love ya.
person Yami Nefertira
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is this a challenge or a story or both? I'm confused...