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AWW!!!! SO CUTE!!! I can't think of anything else to say. The ending was just too adorable

I think you update faster than anyone else on this site...I cant even keep up at this rate. The whole emo and elmo thing, funny.

I've read all the chapters up til now but i just had to comment on this one because its so freaking hilarious. Keep writing, the story is awesome! ^____^ *hugs*

i love this story its so addicting seriously
you have to continue and fast!
omg poor seto and jou is so kawaii!!! ^_^
words cant describe how much i love this story!!!!!!

Oh my ra... I laughed so hard. XD; This is great, absolutely lovely. I didn't expect any less from you, Mizumi. Your sense of humor knows no bounds! I look forward to the next chapter, so you need to hurry up and write it xD your chocobo can starve to death for all I care lol!

jou: how could you put me in jail?
seto: it was a misunderstanding.
jou: yea right
mizu: boys settle down i will fix it i promise.
jou and seto: you had better. you do remember our agreement right?
mizu: *sweat drop* yeah i remember it. i write nothing unless you approve it.
seto: good in the next chapter get my koi out of jail.
jou: yea.
otogi: *not if i have anything to say about it.*

great chapter update soon. loved the puppy. otogi gets everything he deserves.

jail? jail?.....for what............god .... now i really wanna kill seto....jou was inoccent what did he do/ all he did was loveing him...who was this basterd and how the hell he know about jou's crush on seto anyway?.... NOW I WANNA KILL OTSOGI EVEN MORE>>>>>> just you wait otsogi just wait till honda find this out....I hope you kill him in the end...but the way you put out seto's tears and his thoughts...the way he remembers jou and his beauty..that was so romantic....this one was also great...I just can't stop rewie ing...but i guss jou is naive as always..he just makes seto uncertain and confused.....that sees so right seto never experienced such athing before.....poor jou.....he has to come up a plan of his own...he has to know the rules of the game otherwise his down.......read the next tommarrow..and by the way you are already forgiven for not updating for this long it really worthed to wait.....love..kisa

i love dat chapter....my favourite so far
wen he said i want u 2 ave my babies, i was laughing soo hard as i use da same lines on my female friends and since im female...
update soon!

SO AMUSING! Although, why wouldn't Kaiba get Jou out of jail? Oh well, i'm sure all my questions will be answered, all my answers will be questioned in the next exciting installmeant

Eee, you must be added to my favourite author pile at once! <3

Not only is your story amusing, IC, and just all around good, you actually mentioned Isono! *gasp* It's nice to see that some authors remember that he, you know, exists.

So you pretty much just rock, to make it simple.