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xD I find this story funny as hell. Keep it up! I love it!

YAY! I'm so happy that you updated!
And damn, this chapter was HOT!
Awesome Job! I can't wait to read more!

Thanks SO much for coming back to this story and letting know when you did, it was great!

Now that shocked the crap outta me! I didnt know that Ryou could be so "dominate" I am dying to read the next chapter.

I can't wait til you decide to continue with this fic, I happen to like it. Just becuase 'certain ppl' i.e. MORONS, don't pay attention to disclaimers, doesn't mean that you should be discouraged from writing...this is part of FANfiction anyway: you see something you like or that inspires you and you change/use it in your own stories yet not claim what you used for inspiration...

If you decide to add to this(PLZ do) can you send an email to me with the web address to let me know? The email I use for ff stuff like this is PotionsPet@tidni.com. Thanks.

PotionsPet

You know, at first i was enjoying this fiction, it's an unusual pairing and Ryou is obvioulsy not that big of an uke, although you do happen to be plagiarizing a very famous scene from Pulp Fiction, yeah you changed it up a bit but nevertheless it's still stealing, if you can't come up with ideas on your own that doesn't give you the right to take someone elses and pass it off a syour own work, this story started off really good i'm dissapointed.

Yay, Malik lived! XD
And go Ryou!!!!!
Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next!

Good chapter!
I hope Malik doesn't die though...
Please update soon!

wow! What a cliffie. I am hoping that he doesnt die though.

Wow, this was a really good chapter. I'm glad you made Seto seme, good choice.
Hope you can get the next chapter up soon; I'm really looking forward to reading it!