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for Trapped!

by fyrbyrd074

person tinkle time kelly
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OUCH! Talk about hot. Keep it,ummm,"UP".
person Wicabeth
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Pardon me.. I need to go get some towels c.c;;;
person dragonlady222
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. It was kind of humurous too. Poor Yugi trapped with two horny men.
At least, they thought about helping him.
person cer
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh hot hot. And yay for older Yugi.
person tinkle time kelly
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NICE! As your work usually is. Looking forward to seeing where this thing. Hope you have the next chapter ready to go.
person Tasha
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yikes that is hot, unusual set of pairing though it works well...you so need to continue this :P
Very interactive and compelling to read with enough detail to be something else as well. Esp. liked the bit where Yugi realises his visits are maybe more than just because Mokuba asks him to get Seto to take a break etc etc. and with those tight trousers...hell yeah theres mmore to it if the jeans were a concious clothing thought...you know put on on purpose even if Yugi wasn't entirely away of it ^_^ Cool. update?