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by Sylvir

schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very nice story.

Seto and Jou seem so in love with each other. I liked how you made them express their love for each other in each chapter.

And by the way, you write very good lemon^^

It was good also to see everyone else and what happened to them.

It is a light, sweet and cute story. And it is always so good to see Jou and Seto together.
You can maybe write a sequel with Seto and Jou making preparations this time for the wedding. It could be a short story like this one also.

I loved a lot of things in this story but the funniest part was when Jou and the others were waiting for Seto in the party and they found him talking casually with Yami like no one was waiting for him^^
person girlo
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....you can't just end it there! That's mean!
person jin1377
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the first!!!! these stories is what me make liking this site so much... love this!!!
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter, can't wait til the next
person sunsparked
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i believe that is the first time ive every read joey being the dom... but it was really hot
person PotionsPet
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, LOVE the story! When you get the next chapter up, you think you could email me with the web address?
person Journey Maker
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update when you can.. I love stories with Seto and Joey in them.. I'm glad that Serenity is now with her brother. Good Job..