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for Pegasus Academy Host Club

by redhaze

person manda
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far please update soon
person Karmegas
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this absolutely. Please continue. awesome!!!!
person Velvetina
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you're combing two great things!! **Heart eyes** LOVE YOU!! Especially since so far its so well done. I love it. The corrosponding characters are spot on and I'm ever so curious to see what happens next. Poor Jou, I can so seeing him just being totally baffled by everything going on, and I loved that Kaiba tried to keep Jou's good looks to himself, or thats what ot seemed like.

As for a beta, you're work seems pretty good already, I'm not terribly experianced but I'm pretty good at grammer and all that jazz but if you find yourself needing one you can email me at Kittenbelle@hotmail.com, or just email me whenever I'm a friendly person, and if you want proof that I can write I have a couple fo stories up. ((Shameless self plug **wink**))


Anyway, yay you for combining Ouran and Yugioh!!!

Velvetina
person Baru-chan
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So fun I love It go on I wait4 The next CHAPTER
person h0tt11
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story please keep writing its very good and funny.

Hugs,
h0tt11
person mistress of yaoi
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is really funny just like host club, please continue.