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for Sixteen Revisited

by MishikoShinsei

person Calcifer
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I can just hear Yami panicking in his head for a second there: "Crap is this guy a minor? Am I gonna get arrested?" LMAO.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel
person RayeMoon
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::Gives her a guilty look:: I read your review on my story. ::Is smacked:: Now I feel really bad. I hardly read any myself because I'm always writing. But a strip-dancer Yami? HOT! I love the dance descriptions. I can picture it all. Whoo. ::Fans self:: That was way hot. And of course, it was a pride-shipper, which is always good with me. I'm really sorry if I offended you, 'Ko. I wasn't trying to. In fact, almost as soon as I wrote that I was thinking: hey, I've got half a dozen or so loyal readers, why not just do it for them? So I think I going to. Thank you, thank you for your review. And I love this. On to Seventeen.
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really good and hot!
person VII
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TWO words.....freakin....HOTT.....

VII