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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!
J-chan
J-chan
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! This is a very promising story. ^-^
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting start to your story! I don't think that you are going to be able to leave poor Ryou alone after having met his White Knight in Shining Armor who just disappeared through Ryou's open window and back out into the rain - yeah, like a theif in the night (bad, bad pun!). And it would seem that perhaps Bakura had been touched by his chance meeting of Ryou... You must continue with this story!
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i like this story so far do continue with it please i want to know what happens to ryou and bakura next
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter!
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good so far. please post soon, i want to know whats going to happen next.
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg. that was a really promissing start. love it. update soon please
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Make this a oneshot and i'll have your head on a silvery goldish cubiod of a bowl type thing and feed you to Freddie, Marik and Bakura via spork!!
Freddie: In other words..
Marik: update...
Bakura: or be eaten by a...
FOURSOME OF CANNIBAlS!!!
Freddie: In other words..
Marik: update...
Bakura: or be eaten by a...
FOURSOME OF CANNIBAlS!!!
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice first chapter. I can't wait for the next one ^^
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yays and yayness! You're posting it over here! Did you change some things? Added a lemon to it? Oh and your English was just fine, some small gramaticly incorect moments here 'n there, but nothing too distracting.
I'm Chi-chan Lurk's over on ffnet.
I'm Chi-chan Lurk's over on ffnet.