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for Touch

by Tjay

person cinque
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good end. the sex...wow
person MewMew2
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Niao! That was excellent! Original! More than I had orignaly expected. Due to this fic I've decided that I shall continue to read and review your fics for they are of excellent penmenship.
person cinque
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. You described Bakuras craving for contact wonderfully. Hope there will be more soon
person Ruri
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! i like it a lot!
person ruby
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NIN is one of my muses too...trent needs to marry me...
anyway i really liked it...i tought i did a good Bakura!
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... *_* More... *zombie*

There were some grammar mistakes, like using "your" instead of "you're" and "to" instead of "too"; but other than that everything was amazing. *_* I want more. *huggles Ryou and Bakura*
person Kaimmei Tenshi
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I feel sorry for Bakura, being trapped inside his own temptations and lust. Next chapter, please!
person Sekre
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start.