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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, not only did you get the craving, the neediness down well, you really kept bakura in chara. *bows lowly*
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness this was so freaking hot. whew. great great great job! there is nothing more refreshing than seeing characters that are not OOC. :D
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! I loves it!!! ^_^ Great job!! N'cha!!
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy. Shit.
That was amazing! I'm actually tingling o__o
Well done, well done, well done. And, I've been on this site for a while, but this is the first comment I've left.
You have an amazing talent o__o
That was amazing! I'm actually tingling o__o
Well done, well done, well done. And, I've been on this site for a while, but this is the first comment I've left.
You have an amazing talent o__o
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wargafubuguba? o.o;;; That is about the most coherent opening I could come up with. And now I shall continue with the generic "OMFG HOT", and regain my intelligence to give a proper review.
I cannot believe that in-character Tendershipping, that lives up to its name, is even possible. I write it, as I put it, as 'Not-so-Tendershipping'. Violent rape, usually. And usually hated Tendershipping done to its name. But then, Tendershipping isn't my favorite pairing. Psychoshipping is. Pair of doms duking it out for top, loser gets beaten into the floor and fucked senseless in a fully non consentual manner... Just kinda my thing. But this. This was amazing. You may not have gotten me to go 'awww', but you definately got me squirming and half-begging for more. And, just, damn... Wow... Love... I really enjoyed that.
And you have been granted a 5:30 in the morning, intelligent review from Wit. He's gonna go to bed now and think of the logistics, plotbunnies, and possible games that have now opened up within this pairing.
I cannot believe that in-character Tendershipping, that lives up to its name, is even possible. I write it, as I put it, as 'Not-so-Tendershipping'. Violent rape, usually. And usually hated Tendershipping done to its name. But then, Tendershipping isn't my favorite pairing. Psychoshipping is. Pair of doms duking it out for top, loser gets beaten into the floor and fucked senseless in a fully non consentual manner... Just kinda my thing. But this. This was amazing. You may not have gotten me to go 'awww', but you definately got me squirming and half-begging for more. And, just, damn... Wow... Love... I really enjoyed that.
And you have been granted a 5:30 in the morning, intelligent review from Wit. He's gonna go to bed now and think of the logistics, plotbunnies, and possible games that have now opened up within this pairing.
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow.... that was amazing.... Any more chaps ? Please let there me more !!!! I give this story a 10. '~^ if u write more i'll read more plus give u more reviews !!!
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very delicious *purrrs*
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sooo gooood...maybe a par III
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it's funny that Bakura's happy at the end; then again, I'd be happy to if I could have sex with Ryou... *cough*
^_^ You wrote a yummy sex scene! <3
^_^ You wrote a yummy sex scene! <3