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for Hold On

by LeilaLogan

person catti-dono
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Giggles..cant help it, I like to guess..Poor Yami getting the crap beat out of him, bad Moond, bad...doing that to poor Yami...*Reaches for the calendar, damn six more days until an update...BUMMER...(by the way, I believe I am going to enjoy this story very much) catti
person Sansi
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe those two bastards. I bet Yami will return the "favour" someday!
person dragonlady222
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yami, his life is hell. Kumiko is very oblivious to all that is going on. Of course, Yami is going to great lengths to keep her from knowing.
I'm really shocked that Yoru let him out of the house but I'm glad he did.
He is so going to pay for everything he's done.
Good chapter.
person Koorime13
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O... okaaay... So maybe I didn't notice the smilies on their hands? ^^; *shrugs* Did I mention I haven't seen every episode yet? So I might have missed that part^^ Only got interested in the series during the last season and watched a few episodes here and there during that whole Marik/Malik thing going on. Anywhoz... been a fun chappy again. So emotional and all *sniffs* You should let Mi-chan get beat more often^^; Hahahahahahhahahaha I like to "revel in his pain" (grammar?) Mom says I'm such a sadist :P Yeah, so... lookin forward to da next chappy!!!
Ja ne

(ps: In da fist review for Don't let go I put Jonen... I meant to put Shonen ^^;)
person Red Dragon of Egypt
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*keeps an automatic gun fixxed on Anzu*now I have a new target to play with along with Yuro oh*she attaches a rocket to Yuro's back nd launches it sending him back to her owner*there you go hes all yours and dont worry the gems still inside so when hes blasted to smitherense at your feet he'll come back so when your not using Anzu let me know I'll set the gun off huh poor things but I'm a tad confused as to what Yugi means by breaking these rules but knowing you I'll find out soon enough.

Aqua: of course oh and when you do have the go ahead to hurt Anzu mind letting me have a go first

Of course Aqua after all its been days since you feasted on a human so shes' perfect (you may have heard of Aqua from ZephyrGem24 in her various YGO stories here as well as FF.net and he like Yami is very much so in love with Yugi and will tear to shreds any who hurt him literally well keep up the superb job and update asap gtg now JA NE)
person dragonlady222
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I hope he can hold his own with his sister's help.
person dragonlady222
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yami, I wonder why they treat him so bad. Except of course for evil Tea. Now Yuugi is going to suffer.
Poor boy, he's either an angel come to help Yami or a dead soul come back for a special mission to help Yami. Great chapter.
person Koorime13
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O where's the alibi? You skipped years T_T I was so lookin' forward to those years... hahaha I'ts still a nice chappy ^__^ So kawaii!!! And from the fix I've read almost everyone hates Anzu O_o Why? I find her completely normal -next to her friendship-obsession thing- and a guud friend. Oh well... that's just my oppinion. Can't wait for the next chappy though!! Keep up the gr8 work.
Ja ne
person kkk12
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that good so far. please write more chaps. i wonder what that demon wants with Yami and what is Yuugi's secret?
person catti-dono
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH...Yuugi as an angel...ooopppss...was I suppose to type that? catti