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great story, just keep going. it is very interessting.

*Skips into the review room*....Ah...no Yuugi topping?...sighs, okay...I will abid by your wishes...*wipes tear away*....Man that is so unfair!!..Im now legal in my country, damn....love this story by the way...it has a nice flow...poor Yami always getting the bad fathers and dead mothers, whats up with that? and Yuugi with no parents...Geeze...Did you say Anzu bashing?...Oh goody....*runs to closet, flings open door, and grabs a metal baseball bat*....LET THE BASHING BEGIN!!!....catti...(moony, have a great christmas and new year)(you are updating on new years right?, right?)

Great chapter. Yami is starting to open up for Yuugi, that's good.
I bet Kumiko is realising more than Yami thinks.
Poor guys haven't even kissed yet and the rumors are flying.

Yami-kun kawaii, ne!! Gods, I had to laugh so hard thinking back at the times when I got tipsy -^__^- I too laughed at almost everything around me... hahahaha!! Hihihihi!! *Sigh* Such guud times!! Just a few more days to that dreadfull day called x-mas -_- and then... Booze!! Gonna get tipsy again woohoot... you too?
And that part too where Kumiko-chan thought Yami wuz gonna fall for the whole pouting thing going on^^ I already imagined her laughing evily ^__^ This wuz absolutely the best chapter so far^^ Hope it gets better with Yuugi knowing wut's going on. Keep up da gr8 work!! Ja ne

Maybe she'll see a little of what Yami is trying to protect her from now. Yuro so needs to die expecially since he's trheatening Yami's reason for living and staying sane.
The demon is probably laughing his ass off at Yoru. He's probably angry too because he is not succeeding in what he's supposed to do.
I'm sure Yuugi will be there to help them.
Great chapter.

*she pulls on a rope and brings out all her heavy arsenal*ok folks we got the rocket launchers on the left gernade launches on the right and thn we got your usual proximity mines remote mines timed mine and regular gernades oh and my two personal favs the Super Dragon and the Nbombs observe *she tosses an Nbomb at Yoru and creates a massive black dome distorying his nerve system and making it very hard for him to see.*

Now comes the super dragon*she first launches a few gernade rounds then switches over to rapid fire then she dives into her other arsenal and surounds him on all sides by mines then backs away and launches the rocket and gernade launches sending back explosions from the mines.L*

Well that was fun care to join me Moondalian and dont worry about him dieing like I said with my immortal gems in him we can kill as much as we want and he still will come back anyways ready and waiting if not willingly for more death and pain woot.

Well keep up the great work and update asap gtg now JA NE

GUESS WHO AGAIN!! I didn't know you posted this on here too!!

Well, you know what i think about this fic! Ja ne xxx

Poor Yami...not use to stories where he gets the crap beaten out of him and takes it...sheesh....talking about out of character...Seems like its role reversal...Yuugi being the stronger....hmmmm...interesting....might like that flavor....makes you wonder whose the seme and whose the uke in this story...*laughs brazenly*...Geeze whats with the club allowing you to buy alcohol at age 16 and where were they when I was 16...damn...always having to have an older sibling buy booze was expensive....*love your world*...cant wait for next week...three good things...lemon ending of one story, christmas and an update on this story...*pumps fist into air*....catti...PS another thing that I really like about your stories...hardly any Anzu...*smirks*....catti

Hmm that wasnt so bad and dont worry I wont kill you *points to the bound Anzu and Yoru* just them *she grabs a rocket launcher and auto targets Anzu* say hello to my fiery friends Anzu *she launches one and and then another at Yoru to begin a new session of endless painful torture* nd dont worry they bothe have immortal gems in them so I can blast them to kingdome come from now till doomsday and they will stil unfortunately come back *holds out an AR assult rifle*care to join me I'm sure you can use the practice for the next time you want to bash a character.


Well keep up the superb job and update asap and if that bastard touches my Yami again hes getting a heavy dose of Nbomb exlposions of that I can promise well JA NE

Poor Yami, his father is sooo crule !!!! I wonder what Yami and Yugi r going 2 do..... oh and kep on writing !!! still watching and reading !!!