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YAH...Im the man!!!errr woman...the plot thickens....*insert evil laugh*....now involving innocent little girls....naughty, naughty....catti

argh i just got into that...keep posting, its good

*Throws shuriken and kunais at author* >_<# That's not a nice cliffy!! *Pokes a dagger through author's palm... multiple times* Feel my wrath bwahahaha :P
Happy new year Moon-chan^^
Sorry that I didn't review earlier!! I've been so busy these days ^^;
Keep up da gr8 work ^_^

Ja ne!! xoxo

o..kej... maybe that was not the best thing to set the house on fire but what the hell, it can only be better.
i hope you going to add a lemon later, then it will be more fun to read.
// update son please!

Oh dont worry Moondalian I wont hurt you except for this *she turns Moondalian into a tiny kitten in a massive techonologically advanced very well done roller coaster and has her ride it a good twenty times( pretty much take Mantu Dueling Dragons and the Haulk double their thrill and then combined then then you got my roller coaster)

I think that should do for now and the rest is all on Anzu's Yoru's and The ex pharaoh turned demon( I hate saying his name) *she opens a portal and brings out Master Chief of Halo* ok soldier you have your orders I want these three squealing like the pigs they are understand.

MC: Ma'am Yes Ma'am

Get to it then *with fervor he does just that breaking and killing Anzu Yoru and aknumkanon several times

Well that should do for now keep up the superb job and update asap Moond gtg now JA NE

Great chapter.
Yami is so cute when he's flirting. At least, no one blew up the lab during their practical.
Poor Yuugi what is going to do now? Move in with Yami and Yoru?
Probably, then he can protect Yami.

Naughty...burning Yuugi's house down....Now he will have to live with Yami...*laughs*....OOOO....catti

Well that was a great twist. I think you should have it that Yami has yuugi come to stay for a bit and your gets mad and tries to beat Yami but Yuugi steps in. it's just an idea. Well i can't wait to see what happens next. Your doing a great job and i really enjoy reading this story.

i believe i'm new to this story as a reviewer. But all around this story is great. I want to read more and looking past the setting of a house on fire, and killing Yami's mother i can't wait to see more. UPdate soon or i will possitively die from waiting!! :}

I really enjoy reading your story you really need to write more cause i'm dying to see what else happens.