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Great chapter. I'm glad they more than made up and made Kumiko happy. Yuro will not be happy though. I wonder what the demon will do?

Finally!!!....SEX!!!!..geeze took you long enough...making us wait 9 Saturdays for a little bit of lemony goodness...laughs....it was totally worth the wait...I like the whole ex-angel story...I was wondering how you would get Yami to have and think having sex with an angel would work...Cardnal sin just popped into my head...laughs....catti (im glad im not the only one who cant stand that prove your age thing, god people why bother about 90% of the writers are under age...geeze)

I think the reason why Yugi didnt tell Yami the truth is probably because he was forbidden to in wich I hope Yami understands Yugi would not have withheld such an important detail if he could but knowing "heaven" I'm sure they didnt and dont worry moondalian I'm just going to send you through another trip through slipspace*turns her back to normal*but as a human oh *she hands moondalian sun block 2000k* your going to need that trust me slipspace can get pretty dam hot going at the speed you normally go in it well keep up the great work and update asap oh and by all means enjoy the ride JA NE

So she's not as oblivious to what is going on around her. I wonder if she realises how much Yami takes to protect her or any part of it.
Yoru is a truly despicable person. Using his own daughter like that.
I hope Anzu gets whats coming to her too.
Yoru is going to cross Aknukadin one time too may and find himself in a living hell.
I hope yami forgives Yuugi for what he was keeping secret and understands why.
Good chapter.
As cliffhangers go this was not too bad.

Things are starting to make sense!!! I had entertained the idea of Yuugi as an angel, but decided it wasn't going to be that way. You fooled me! I hope this won't hurt the relationship they have going. And what about the devil? Can't wait for more!!!!

I did review before but just as i clicked the review button to send it the internet died on me.. so i dunno if you did or didn't get it. Anyway, glad Yuugi finally ound out about Yuugi and you KNOW that i adore the fic. YOU HAVE TO UPDATE MORE THAN ONCE A WEEK GODDAMN IT!! It's not FAIR on anyone... *pouts* Speak to ya later

and that baka catti kind of let it slip in the first chapter review....laughs....oops....my bad....have I told you lately that I love this story?...catti

*she straps kitty Moondalian to a space ship of the UNSC and has it constanlty go into slipstream with enough speed behind it to have moondalians fur clining to the ship*

Ok now for Yoru and that dumbass demon *she has Kelly go after Yoru with the same brutality she would against the covenent whil Master Chief goes to the demon world and with the same effetiency they showed already he lays to waste every last one of the demons and kills the demon lord with his own bare hands*

Nicely done soldier you may go*they bothe return to halo*

Well you know the routine Moondalian update asap or I'll send the entire spartans on a man hunt for u gtg now JA NE

hey i'm back sorry it toke so long...~^_^~ Yami is soo catching the love virus ! Come on you two, amit that you two are in love with each other ! Also, damn you F~~~ing Yoru ! i hope you know that if you kill Kumiko you might hurt him but it well bring him closer to Yugi ? And what does that demon lord want with Yami any way ? He has to spill it some day....
Please write more chaps ! its geting better every word now !

Good chapter. Now Yoru knows that Yuugi is special. I wonder what he's going to do and how he's going to involve Kumiko? He's really a pain in the rear and needs to suffer.