rate_review Reviews

The world needs more people like you! Please, do not feel like I am insulting you, but if you really are straight, wow you are one of those rare people.

Awww, that was very lovely! Cute, sexy, hot, and beautiful passion all in one. ^_^

I love how you characterized Seto to be both in character and an uke. Your portrayal of Katsuya was just as intriguing; he was flirtatious and witty. Quite original I would say.

Mokuba was pretty much character as well, very adorable. A very well written one-shot and I enjoyed it throughly. One of the best puppyshipping fics I've ever read. ^^

aww.. that was adorable! me likey veddy much indeed! =^_^=

awww. that was really good. i loved it.

Awww, this is such a cute story! I love it and can't wait to read more of your works.

Kyaaaa! So cute! And also very original *claps* I've never read a fic where Seto is such a curious virgin, specially a virgin that hasn't experienced any sort of sexual activity, so he was so adorable clueless *glomps*. I also loooved Katsuya’s way of flirting, so sexy, yet he knew when to stop.

Also Mokuba is adorable and very smart, so he sounds really in character *thumbs up*

Such a happy ending and a good read. Please write more fics like this!!

Constructive criticism: I don't know if you are aware of this, but usually the order of the names indicates who is seme(top), and who is uke(bottom). The order is seme/uke, and it makes it easier for readers to identify. So this having Seto as uke (yummy, I love him like that) would be J/S and not the other way around <:3

this is a very sweet story but i like it

Awwwwwwwww! :D

awesome story ^^

Woo hoo. Sexy and fun. Good story. I just loved Katsuya's pro bono work.