rate_review Reviews

HOLY! Oh my GOD that was awesome. You weren't kidding when you said there was a surprise ending. The characterization was wonderful. When I first started reading I thought it was a Joey/Seto pairing but once I got halfway through I started thinking possibly Yami/Bakura or even Seto/Bakura. I know, alternate pairings but still it really made me think. Then the ending. Hee Hee, 'Kaiba-boy' HOT DAMN I love the way he says that. Anyway, I'm going away now to drool in my empty swimming pool. Wonderful one shot!

Ja ne!

Nefra

So... I was not expecting that! Nice job. Only thing, all the bolded him's, and he's or his got distracting after awhile. While I realize names can't be discussed, cause that would TOTALLY ruin the ending, maybe you could try something else. Good job though.