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for Shattered Heart

by kaibastalker

person Vantri
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey again.. It's Vincent, I just registrated the other day with the name Vantri...

Nice chapter, now there was some characters I didn't really knew about, only by hearing you and Keyhala talk about them ALOT....
But it was a good chapter and it was fun to read it ^^
I really want to see how it turns out for Ryou, hope it turns out good because he seems so innocent and all ^^

Well, I think I have to write my fanfic "Shadow Warrior - Naruto" *Shameless advertasing, no shit?*
Until next chapter...

*Vantri dissapears in the shadow in the spotlight*
person e.t.c.
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is gonna be a fun story!
I can tell!
person Vincent
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. It will be fun to follow this one for a while. You have any idea how long it will be?
I think you made the first chapter a good one, even though I dont know so many of the characters that appeard here it was fun to read about them.
Well, I'm no good at previewing (strange word) so I will stop now before I make a fool out of myself ^^'