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for On Camera

by Jurple

person HikariAi
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, very interesting... PLEASE update soon... ^_^
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what version is which,I read and reviewed the other version before I found out about your "Lame" issue. That's exactly what I was trying to warn you about. Your story is not 'Lame". It's actually pretty good. And I'd gladly read another chapter, hopefully soon.
person jtwsnw20
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is so funny and cute