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for Two of a Kind

by SparkofLife

person Mazu
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!
person Black_Ink
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would suggest not changing the pov so much, it's very confusing. Either pick one character or use third person perspective if you want to show the thoughts of both characters
person dragonlady222
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Too bad Katsuya couldn't save ehr from the beating but at least, he saved her from being raped.
They are just so much alike. I loved it!