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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would suggest not changing the pov so much, it's very confusing. Either pick one character or use third person perspective if you want to show the thoughts of both characters
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Too bad Katsuya couldn't save ehr from the beating but at least, he saved her from being raped.
They are just so much alike. I loved it!
They are just so much alike. I loved it!