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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(chewing on lip) this sounds like a really good but terrifying story...
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't leave the story hanging lk this.
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is kind of hard to read with the use of 'Joey' twice in each sentence. "Joey's father was shot when Joey was in the car." Its a little repeative... Theres always room for calling him by something other than his name. What about 'the blond' 'the boy' and so on and so forth...
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
beautiful story. l luv it
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for Joey for having such a bastard of a father who would turn his own son over to men like that just to keep his life from being snuffed... Please update when you can.....
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Joey,
This is getting good. I cant wait for Seto to show up.
This is getting good. I cant wait for Seto to show up.