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by rainbow21

person cinque
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mhh I would beg for Kaiba any time...
Love it. Update soon.
Go Go Kaiba seduce him
person Riley
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I think it has a good plot. However, and I'm not saying this to be mean, I think it could use some improvment. Hooking up with a beta would be great, one would enhance this story so much. I would volunteer but my grammat skills are lacking.
Good job, and keep it up.
person seto'swifey
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm dying to know what's going to happen next. When is Kaiba going to try and seduce Joey?