rate_review Reviews

I can only assume you are no longer writing due to the last update being in 2006, kind of sucks that the final chapter doesn't have any sex in it. Anyway I greatly enjoyed this story.

I just want to say that both A Wiser Generation and Wisdom of the Pharaoh are both great stories and i hope you dont stop writing, because that is one of the things that drive me crazy, when someone writes a really kickass story like you're doing, but stops and leaves a poor tourtured soul writhing in agony... oh and, you see this is my first review so i dont really know how to do this, but i think that a good idea for some conflict in Wisdom would be if either Bakura found out the keywords for everyone, and only Yami wasn't affected so they have a duel or Bakura tries to hypnotize Yami and has it backfire due to the Egyptian Gods or some bull like that. Also a nice lemon would be if Yugi felt guilty for enslaving the girls against their will, so he releases them and asks them if they want to stay with him, and they lovingly agree. But whatever you do just please, please dont stop. Thank you for all of your hard work and I hope my ideas have helped.

If you're still looking for a "teacher" Duel Monster, how about using Hysteric Fairy?

i cant wait more more more

Dont you remmber eirlier in your fic, one of the girls metioned they realluy like syrus. Well i love that chick maybe you should put those two together in a sex sceane.

It is called a parody because it is harder to sue someone over a parody than a non-parody. This was demonstrated with a court case involving Larry Flint and a joke over a politician in Hustler. It is filled out at Literotica in their Celebrity section, which holds much Fan fiction.

Also many of my anime erotica can be found at Mediaminor.org and at HVulpes Yahoo group (The later needs you to be over 18 and a yahoo account. If you are under 18, you will be banned from the site). They also hold my non-erotic works.

I also write a few erotic threads at Anime Addventure, Comic Book Addventure, Chyoo and the UBE Addventure.

I hope that helps.

sweet story i love the jaden/alexis pairing it's the best paring out i think an to make the school look like it is in the story i think i pure genuiess i can't wait till the chapter

Love your wiser generations stories but where are the others you keep mentioning? I'd enjoy reading those too.

this is one awesome story once i read it i could stop till the last chapter and also fuck you masked reviewer jaden soo deserves dont get mad cause this is the life you wanna have or because C.king thought of this first oh yeah did i mention this is an awesome story

sweet story i couldn't stop once i read the first chapter i can't wait till the next one