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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Brilliant work =D
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*wibbles happily* I loved this when I first read it on LD. =D
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I loved it!
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uber-sweet ending! I love their rendition of 'love at first sight'...I have to admit, though, that while the beginning and the ending were really good, the middle needs a little more editing as far as connectedness...I think it needs more interaction between Kaiba and Jou, or more scenes in general in order for it to be a little more believable...the story is an extremely good concept, it just didn't flow as well as some of the other stuff you had written...but I love you! Please don't maim me! It was still good! ^-^
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. So sweet and lemony. Good Job.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really REALLY good. Cute and sweet. First lemon, right? Not bad.