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That was really a great story!!! Thank you for posting it!!! It is probably Duke who wants revenge right?? Well I now start to read the sequal!!! See you!!!

I love this story. Make sure to recheck spelling and grammer. That is not a flame. Update soon.

that bastard!!!! *thinks of multiple way in which to maim Tristan*

I have a feeling that if the yami's find out some's going to die.
Cool keep it coming.

Like I said before great story. Post next chapter soon.

loved the story please update soon. maybe you can bring in the yamis like they help seto stop Jeys dad going Ape on him. Just thinking ^_^

I love this story, you have a great writing ability and it shows in this story... Please update when you can...

As usual great chapter. Update soon.

I am so glad you moved this story here. I read it on ff.com. I thought it was a great story and still do it is on my favorite list along with the sequel burning eyes. The way you discribe each character and situation throughout your story is great. The passion you feel for each character is beautifully written. You can feel for how Seto feels for Joey on all levels. The way Joey feels so lost and alone and finding out the one person he thought that hated him would be his salvation from a life of torment and misery that even his friends couldnt save him from. I hope you update this at regular intervals because this story from beginning to end is great.

This is possibly the best story about Joey and Seto that I've ever read. Glad you brought this over from FF because everyone needs to read this. I cried, I cursed and then I cheered. Each character is described so well and This is my all time greatest story that I've read... Great Job and please continue when you can......