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December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating story. I like it. There's only one problem: grammar and spelling. There are a lot of words in here that are misspelled and it subtracts from an otherwise enthralling story. I just read all posted chapters in one sitting. It's good.
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow that was realyl good, an awsome story, i've been wanting myself to do a gravitation yugioh crossover involving puppyshipping >_<
one piece of advice though, get a beta there are a few easily found grammer errors, other than that awsome work look forward to more
one piece of advice though, get a beta there are a few easily found grammer errors, other than that awsome work look forward to more
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October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great and funny story^^ I love ot!! Please update soon!!
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hoho that's funny^^
Update!
Update!
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Kaiba over reacted just a little.
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what Kaiba will do to him. Great chapter. The chaos has begun.
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really great. I can't wait to see more.
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow ok this had me sad for jou and laughing too. I hope you update soon!
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn cliffhanger what happens now i must know
and i love badluck shu is just so cute
and i love badluck shu is just so cute
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jou had better run Seto's out for blood and its Jou's. Update soon.