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oxo So chapter 4 anyone? seriously this is an interesting concept and I want to know what you have planned for your cute little doubles XD cant wait till it is updated hehehehehe~ Good story just wish the chapters were a tiny bit longer but other than that very good start.

Awesome story! I can't wait to see what happens next! I can't think of a good title, maybe 'Demon's Prey'?

This is a really good story but I have to admit the spelling makes it a little difficult. You seem to be spelling phonetically, which does not always work, in English particularly, example 'intire' instead of 'entire' 'bate' instead of 'bait'. Does whatever you use to type have spellcheck? I apologize if this has been noted already or if I come across as offensive. I don't want to sound that way, because like I said, I REALLY like this story and I'm so glad to see it continued. Hell, I just signed up SO I could comment, I like the plot so much. As for title, why not 'Demon Queen'? Or something else with demon in it?

Cool story. Update soon!!

There are a few spelling mistakes, but overall, it rocked!! Update it very soon! ^^ I thought her name was spelled Mai not Mia..... oO

Interesting please continue this'll be interesting, i think.

I really hope you dont intend to give this story up, I come by every other day to see if you've updated, I really am genuinly interested! Please update soon ne? Your fan Passing Reader

An intriguing setup! I am looking forward to more.

You've caught my intrest, I wanna see where this is going! ;p
I really like :D

This keeps getting more and more interesting XD
I really like this idea!
Im looking forward to the next few chapters, I cant wait to see what happends next! ;p