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person LadyVirgo1956
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea Seto won. *LadyVirgo1956 is doing the happy dance.* Seto will get Mokuba back. Just dont let Pegasus trap him inside a card. Ryou and Bakura will be a match for Seto hope he can keep up with them. *snickers* Great chapter update soon.
person LadyVirgo1956
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seto is very protective of his brother. I hope in your story Seto does beat Yugi. If you're not going to put Seto/Jou together I hope Bakura is in this formula. Seto dueling under Pegasus's rules this should be interesting. Update soon.
person LadyVirgo1956
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No Seto/Jou *sobs* I'll still read *sob* Update soon T_T Good chapter.
person LadyVirgo1956
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The chapters are short and I hope they are longer in the future. I hope that you evevtually pair Seto and Jou together. As for Honnda and Anzu they are idiots. Ryou's not to be trusted. Yugi is so dense here it is really funny I wonder what he gave Seto. Update soon.
person LadyVirgo1956
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I understand I havent read too many of the manga *sigh* but I am still enjoying this. I do like Kaiba and Jounochi/Joey. I would love to see the direction you're going to take this in though. Update soon. Note Kaiba is smart flying a helicopter is nothing to him.
person LadyVirgo1956
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It looks to me like you are following the show with your on little twist i love it. Yugi can be a pain. whats next. Updare soon.
person LadyVirgo91656
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting to say the least. I would like to see where you are going with this. So update soon.
person Drachenaugen
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My, my...interesting. I must say, no wonder Seto left Yugi, I've always pictured him as 'too' good a guy, to the point where it's a bother *sighs* And Kaiba-sweetie? Por Seto -_-

Well, let's see where this 'alter parody version' of your's goes, I'll be waiting for next chapter so keep the good stuff coming ;3