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If the cops are going to bring everyone in the Police had better have a large holding cell because everyone was there for a duel tournament. That is a lot of people including staff. That little girl is such an idiot. I liked it that Ryou was playing hide-an-seek with Mokuba that was so cute. Well Merry Christmas and update soon.

Freddie: ^^ I got a pink blankie

Marik: I had SEX with BAKURA!!

Freddie: *cries*

*glares at Marik* WHAT HAVE I TOLD YOU???!!!!

Marik: *whistles*

*slaps hand to forehead*

CHRISTAMS IN HELLL WOOOOOO!!!!

*everyone is being normal.....*

...normal for me and the guys LOL xx

Merry CHRISTMAS TO YOU TOO!!!!!

Yea..^^ I'm just wondering is the above stuff works...also you don't want to see the worst *sweatdrops*

Seto kill Pegasus. I don't think so. Torture, maim, take-over his company. Kill nah. Bakura on the other hand would. I hope Seto can stop the on slaught of a police investigation and the media. If this doesn't bring out Bakura I don't know what will. Great chapter and I like the way you are updating. Way to go and update soon.

Lady in pink strikes again. I hope Seto can handle the situation ok. She acts like a real brat. Fast updates are great and this chapter is great. Update soon.

Freddie: *snickers* She thinks you're our Mommy!!

*sweatdrops*

Marik: *starts laughing*

Oh Brother...save me...what did I do to deserve this?

Bakura: *smirks* You have a brother?

Axie: WHERE'S MARLY??? *starts crying*

Marluxia: here baby shh....*rocks Axel*

*sighs*

Seth: FREDDIE IS A VIRGIN!!

*sweatdrops* not again.... *turns to you and whispers* add me..I never read the email...I musta threw it away...before I could read it *sweatdrops*

Seto and Seth: FREDDIE IS A VIRGIN!! *starts singing*

I have a headache

Pegasus: RIGHT BOYS! BED!! *everyone goes to sleep*

Why did you-?

Pegasus: Because you my daughter and I love you *kisses on the forehead* Thanks Papi *hugs him and tucks everyone in*

*whispers* this is the quietest day in hell

Pegasus you and I: *nod and walk away*

*smirks* I live with them because I love them...We're Family... *sweatdrops as Bakura teases Freddie about his virginity* Exuse me a moment...BAKURA LEAVE FREDDIE ALONE!! THE POOR GUY IS ALREADY TRAUMATIZED AS IT IS!!

Freddie: *sniffles*

Aww there there Freddie...it's okay *rocks Freddie in a motherly manner* Shh...I know *kisses the top of his head* He doesn't understand. Shh...Calm down baby it's okay..Now go do mommy proud and go kill Jason

Freddie: YAY!!! THANKS MOMMY!!! *skips off happily to kill Jason*

*sweatdrops* I gotta do that because otherwise He'll kill Bakura....

Marik: Mils...I'm inviting Seth and Seto over is that okay, along with Sephiroth, Axel and Marluxia is that okay?

*mutters* I don't have a choice....*shakes head* Why don't I have any normal friends?

*evertyone blinks at me*

Seth: define normal....

Normal is being a family with friends of the family and with everyone screaming names at each other...

Marik, Bakura and Freddie: What are we?

Family!

Seth, Seto, Marluxia and Axel: Who are we?

Friends of the Family!!

Marik, Bakura, Seth, Seto, Marluxia, Axel and Freddie: What do we do?

Screams names at each other!! have sex...yell some more...cry...yell

Everyone: Excatly

Ok I'm sorry...You're right...we're dysfunctional but at least we are normal ^^ No with that bit over and done with ^^ Freddie...Go kill Jason, MariK, Bakura have sex, kiss or something and you *pionts to Seth, Sephiroth, Seto, Marluxia and Axel* Try not to wreck the place *turns to to you* You have bebo..MSN or something...

Seto's got it bad, and yes he is always working. That is one of the reasons his company is such a success. When Bakura finally does make his appearance how will you protray him good, bad or indifferent for now. I know that in the show he is protrayed as pure evil with a lot of hidden agendas, and whos to say he doesnt remember Bakura it could just be all an act on his part to protect Bakura. Update soon.

*nods head* Sadly...the poor guy has never had a cock up his ass

Freddie: *cries* just tell the whole world why don't you!! Everyone thinks I'm ugly!!

Marik: *sweatdrops* He's gay?

Bakura: *sweatdrops* He's a virgin?

*deadpans* Marik, Yes, Bakura, Don't you ever pay attention?

Bakura: Huh? what? *is distracted by Marik'a ass*

*mutters* Point proven

You: Another typical day in hell then?

*nods* unfortunately....

Ryou is so sweet. In the anime if I remember right Ryou was not very well liked. Tolerated but not really liked. Bakura on the other hand was brash and in his own way protective of Ryou and would get upset with anyone that hurt him. I liked the way you captured the way he is in this chapter. Update soon.