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person LadyVirgo1956
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mokuba has lousy timing and you know Bakura wont let this drop. Update soon.
person Vantri
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*rubs his head*
I will watch were I'm going ^^

Heh, Bakura is baaad *smiles* and Kaiba blushes... that's a rare sight *laughes*
It's fun to read this, I'm here next chapter too...

*Finnaly finds the door* I'm off...
person The one named Ishtar Motou with Millie at the beggining
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM

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Marik: Leave it Millie and give her silent treatment

Bakura: *smirks* Millie scares people when she does that

*smirks but says nothing*
person vivarose
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very cute story, i look forward to its progression :D
person Vince
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh... so there's the door... I'm leaving now bye.... Just kidding, first the review ^^
It was a nice chapter.. I haven't read the manga but it's fun to read this anyway ^^
Kaiba sure was suprised when he got to know that Pegasus died of an Heartattack xD
Bad Bakura that didn't say anything.. Well, It was fun reading. Until next time.
*Walks into the wall* Heeeyyy, the door was right here...
*runs of searching again*
person LadyVirgo1956
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bakura is so twisted you got to love him. This was a good chapter and Seto is right the cops are idiots and Bakura is a jerk. But he is so twisted and I think that is why Seto likes him. Update soon.
person The Ones that hates Pink too
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie...but I want more Yaoi...*cough* erom em *cough* and more hot stuff

Freddie; In otrher words...

Marik: UPDATE IMPROVE IT OR DIE!!!

Bakura: You heard the bitches *kisses Marik*

person You know me...I'll give you a CClue...I HATE PINK TOO!!
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Freddie: Will someone lay me?

Everyone: *sweatdrops*

Freddie: SEE I'M UGLKY!!

Marik: No your not...you're just special...

Freddie: *sniffles* really?

*nods* Yep *turns to you and whispers* great strory....now update again ^^

Bakura: *screws Marik*

Freddie: I'm Special ^^

*pats Freddie on the head* Yes....you are special *sweatdrops*

Til next time...
person Vantri
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Walks in*
Wow, what a nice and big room... I wonder were it came from... Oh Sorry... time for the review...
A nice story even though the short chapters. t's fun to read about how it's for Kaiba under all this time... and for Ryou and Bakura ^^
It was fun reading all 25 chapters... even though you forced me... And Yes... I will read the next chapter that comes out too ^^
Well, That's all for now I think... heeeyyy... were's the door?

*walks around in the big room* I will review next time If I can find the door... Bye..
person LadyVirgo1956
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Bakura finally decides to show himself. I know Seto's glad about that. I wonder what kind of alibi they came up with I hope its a good one. I do love Bakura in this he's such a schemer. If you want a challenging story look on my story list I have one that deals with Bakura, Seto and Seth Seto's counter part from Egypt. Great chapter and update soon.