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person Crimson 2006
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah I love this story, so you can expect a review with every chapter.
The funny thing is that I was watching the episode where Seto goes to see Isis (earlier today)...and then you wrote this chapter. I must say that I like your version of it a lot more because you added Bakura. Nice Job. Can't wait to see what happens next!
person Vantri
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good evening my folks... HEY... when did I get so polite? *stares into nothing*
Oh well... Time to review..

That annoying little Unicorn ^^'
Why can't she be a good little girl and stop annoying Kaiba xD
No much Action betwen Kaiba and Bakura in this one ehh?... Well, it was good anyway ^^

I will be here next chapter too..
It's been nice to staying here..
Some... one... please hit me hard so I go back to my regular me... PLEASE...
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie...

*looks in cupboard and shuts it shaking* Don't. Look. In. There............

Marik: What's wrong?

Bakura: It can't be that bad *peers in* X______________________X

BAKURA!!!!! *voices breaks*

Marik: *looks in and laughs* So Freddie managed to finally get yourself a boyfriend?

Freddie:.......................SASKUKE FLIRTED FIRST!!!

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*then there was silence*

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MFBWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!

Sakuke: *flushes tidies himself up and runs out the cuboard crying*
person LadyVirgo1956
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And the fun begins. I just know hes going to run into Yugi and Yami. That should be interesting. Will Noah and the Big Five be showing up. What about Marik and Malik. So update soon.
person Crimson 2006
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That Unicorn brat is such a pain =/
Good chapter though....I can't wait to read the next one.
person crimson 2006
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a cute story! I love it!
Please update soon.
person The One and Only MIM
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh I still hate Unicorn...she's a pain in the ass and a fuckin mary sue UGH!

*looks arounds* hey where are the guys *cries*
person Vantri
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*thinking of something and crashed into Kaiba*
Sorry Kaiba... I didn't mean too...

Well of too review this chapter then ^^

So, more action betwen Kaiba and Bakura ehh? Nice
Kaiba: WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?
I seems you like Kaiba to kiss that silver haired Bakura... That Nice... I'm turning into a YaoiFanboy...
Kaiba: Me.. Kiss that beautiful silverhaird boy? NO WAY.... WERE DID YOU READ THA..... OH MY SWEAT MOTHER OF... WHO PUT THAT THERE? I'm going to sue you big time...

Well.. I think I have to go now... but I will be back next chapter to read that one too...

*Walks away from an angry Kaiba*
person LadyVirgo1956
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seto can't win for loosing. People have such lousy timing. He finally admits his feelings and starts to show them and people just keep interupting him. Update soon need a lemon here somewhere.
person Shadow Mistress
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is filled with short, sweet, and awesome chapters. ^^ I gotta love how you portray your characters, because you portray them with such intrigue and humor. Keh, the heir to Industrial Illusions is a little girl with pink hair. Lovely encounters with Seto Kaiba. XD I like how you have Bakura care about Ryou-kun so that they now live w/ Seto. Very interesting. So is this going to be Candleshipping (aka Bakura/Seto/Ryou) or is it just going to be one or the other?

I do apologize for not reading/reviewing your story in such a long time, but I don't often check on this site except during the summer. School work is killing me. >_< anyways, I do hope to read more of this, til the next time. ^_~