rate_review Reviews

I am going to miss this story. I liked Battle City. With a long story it is hard to keep up the inspiration, you'll get it back when you least expect it. There are other areas and universes you can write for. Just have patience with youselve and just pace yourself a little. Now the review great chapter I loved the fact that Isis doesn't like the Pharoah and blames him for what is happening to her brother. Unicorn is such a brat selling such valuable cards like the god cards. Update soon.

*forces Millie to drink* Here you go Mind slave!!

Millie: WTF???? Marik since when did you get to review?

Since you became my mind slave...

Millie: Now I'm just scared...am I dead or dreaming?

Bakura: *smirks* Both

Millie: *looks at KS* I blame your potion for this...

*smirks* At least it doesn't give you extra private parts Mind Slave! *shudders*

Freddie: *sings* I'm a barbie girl in a barbie world imagination It's your world's creation ^^

Sasuke: Love the Story Yankiedoo so...update soon...

Millie: I'm going to die again and try to wake up normally *dies of the Barbie Song*

Whee more chapters! Hilarious as always and I love how Bakura was making Seto blush some more. *smirks* I'm liking this story and how it follows the story with some fun-filled twists. Til the next time then. See ya. ^_~

Sasuke: OMG!!! *giggles* I love you soooooo much Freddie *kisses deeply*

...............................MY EYES!!!! AGGHHHHH!!!!

Marik: MILLIE!!!!!!!!

Bakura: Dude. That. Is. So. Wrong.

Freddie: My pretty little ninja *kisses back*

*coughs up blood in a corner somewhere*

Marik: It's gonna be okay Millie *keeps me steady*

*wipes up blood* I'm cool

Freddie: Sasuke...my beautiful sexy Sasuke

No..I'm not *coughs up blood again*

Sasuke: *purrs into Freddie* You smell like Death

Marik: O____________________________________________o

X....................................................X

Bakura: >_> <_<

*scratches Head* Damn tree that appears out of nowere... *Chops the tree down*
Much Better *big smile*

Oh... Review time!!
This chapter was interessting. And Kaiba were blacked out for a long time, and he doesn't belive in rebirth and such...
He must belive in that kinda stuffs xD
He were interessted when they said about the gods, nothing else excepted from Kaiba... Only power xD

I guess it's my time to leave..
*ties red bandana around his forhead* Farwell folks..
*swings his red cape and walks away*

Talk about going in the opposite direction of the show. I never read the magna but this is getting interesting. I always thought that Isis liked the Pharoah, and the three cards where split between Seto, Yugi, and Marik. Update soon want to know where you are taking this.

*is still shaking* It scares the crap out of me too xx

Bakura: Wtf? *looks at Saskuke giggling while Freddie carries him bridal style*

Marik: That is going to give me nightmares for weeks

*cries into Marik*

Marik: Oh well done...you've scared Millie...shh it's okay...Daddy's here

*sniffles* okay daddie wuv you *snuggles*

It is so funny that Seto can't remember names. You would figure that being the CEO of a large company he would remember names. The flash back/vision was great want more. Update soon.

*goes Around drooling....*
Heh... Heh... wonderful... Hmm?... hey What are you looking and? *Random person reacts.. And he runs away*

Crap, Another wonderful fantasy ruined... well time to review.

Bakura doesn't have such good memory doesn't he?! Takes him a while to remember... what's her name... Icy... no Isis name xD
And Kaiba seem fairly suprised when Isis started to talk about the millenium items and the Puzzle and Ring's Inprisoned souls.. And when he saw the tablet he seem to be really spurised... Fun to read ^^

*Starts to think about something wonderful and walks away*
Se..see... you next time....

ack sorry i lost the story for a bit there! Its moving a long very nicely, I love how you're taking actual occurances from the show and meddling them into your plot. Although I'm not seeing a definate ending for the story, it seems to go on a bit without much of a solid destination in mind...not that I have a problem with that ^_^