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for Dance

by LeilaLogan

person ryotigergirl
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. it cute.
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh... even if it was just shonen-ai and not yaoi, I wouldn't be able to just adore this fic >.<

Loved cute-bi-Yuugi, and of course sex god drop-dead-gorgeou Atemu... But it was the details that I loved more, the dance school, bicht Anzu, the slowly but steady growing atraction between those two!!!!!

But the cherry of this nicely done cake was Atemu's father. Just because he showed a disgusting side of the prejudice, even if he didn't hurt that much. Great job!!! I would favorite you if this was FF . Net

^.~
person yamiyugi
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this one but you could add more to it. It seems like more could be added, or at lest one more chapter. Anyways I really liked it. Great job.
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG IT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!! I'm on my knees pleading that you will make another y/yy story!!!!! *bows*

-je ne

Kk
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
[insert cat call here] Nicely done...lemony freshness. Ballroom dance is fun, and it made me laugh because I took up ballroom dancing for the first time later in the year last year. Now, if I only got that result from it. :P Juuust kidding.
person Ayeshagirl
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice indeed. Great even.

It had a good story to lure you, and make you believe there was a plot, which there wasn't :p, but a brilliant illusion none the less. I'm surprised and not surprised the first chapter got no reviews. It deserved reviews, but hardly anyone seems to review these days...

keep up the good work :D
person Snow Angel
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it...but I'm always a little annoyed that people think Yami HAS to have had sex previously. (I mean, couldn't Bakura tell him how or some crazed yoai fan girl? Or why not have him look it up just simply 'cuz he's gay and wants to know?)

I'm betting Yami's dad boots him out or something. *Giggle * I like possessive Yami. He's fun.
person LilyHopper
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWW! Super kawaii! You are such a talented author! May I request maybe a sequel to this extraordinary story? People, if you like funny, romantic, wonderfully-written stories, this is a MUST-READ!!!
person Pat
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. *claps* Great work.
I love it!!! ^_______^
YamixYugi Forever!!!!
Please continue with the great work.