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for Behind the Mask

by Sansi

person Kari-Sama
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uwaaaaa~ So cute! It reminds me (The first part) Of Phantom Of The Opera! I love it so far! Please continue

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person yamiyugiforever
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I hope you update soon. I like the story line. Its very intresting.

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person Sakura-Laurel
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo! You must continue with this as soon as possible! Please!!!!!!!!!

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person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
RD: i can understand Yugi's friends cuz they dont want there personal lives blabbed out into the public last thing they want/need but come on ppl this is yugi for goodness sakes if he can keep an entire huge chunk of history underwraps i think its more then safe to assume that he'll keep his lips sealed bout his friends relationship its not like hes stealing there ideas or advice and using it himself no hes just observant and it allows him to see flaws that are pretty common and at times can be pretty tedious that can be easily eliminated so it kinda helps if has personal refs to look through to help him see what flaws or mistakes that he can see and not be told about from his friends and see were that coexists with another persons relation ship ez hardly nything to loose ones cool bout hehe i think its sweet what yugi's doing hehe but i can see y he wont tell yami its not like its bad job but some may not see it that way depends on how open they are to idea's if u will well Sansi keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE

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person Gaia
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is getting better. They meet for real. What happen next? Keep up the great work. Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne

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person Owaranaimono Aite
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!!! Excellent fic so far!!! Can't wait to see where it's going. I've actually started work on that fic for you, and it's into the first chapter, after the prologue. I finished my other story too if you didn't know. XD Enough about me! More about you! I can't wait to see what happens. IS something big and bad going to pop up just after a relationship is built? Will there be a happy ending?!

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person dawn
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool

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person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*starts to cry* it's an amazing story but i hate cliffhangers!!!!

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person Devious Lil Devil
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hah. that wat sweet. poor yugi was so busy ogling (did i spell that right?) yami that he didn't even notice that yami called him cute. i cant wait for them to get inside the apartment. hopefully there will be an exchange of digits (and or bodily fluids) *smirk*

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person chi
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u updated!!!!dis is gettin interestinpls pls pls do more

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