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person ReaperRain
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease (and yes, that was 15 'e's) update this story! The idea sounds interesting, and I really want to find out what's going to happen. Plus, you left it on a cliffhanger. that's just cruel. Please write more!
person RandomPerson
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good! What a cliffhanger though...so very mean. Say, what's up with the reviewing system? I have to be logged in (don't have an account) to review most of the stories here, so I can't...I guess it's something to prevent anonymous flames (you get a LOT of flamers on AFF.net) Anyway, going off topic there, the story was awesome! I really hope you update soon so I can read more. Keep it up, darlin'!
person Eternal Nightshade
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...you're good. Very good. Nice beginning. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
person tavi
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please don't give up on this story. The beginning of this is so good. And I am so bored as there isn't much out there about Y/Y. So I decided to bug you and a few others:)
person Arthur
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Poor Yugi, he's so cute when sad. But hopefully you'll give him something to be happy about soon, ne?
I hope your next chapter comes quickly, this is very fun to read!
person Yami-Echo
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was, absolutely brilliant! I can't WAIT to see what the next chapter holds for our dear little Yugi; is the stranger Yami, or someone more sinister? Where has our little innocent ended up? So many questions, so little time... so update!

Ps. Yes, I'm from ff.net, in case you recognised the name. Oh, and again, UPDATE! :p
person Passing Reader
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!!! Waaa, you've enraptured me! I can see the effort you put into this story and I cant wait for the next chapter!!!! XD
person Teague
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rawr!
That was great, I can't wait to read more. Lovely-evil cliffhanger at the bottom x_x.
Mer more!
person Harutemu
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I like what I see, and your writing style is interesting. I hope to read more soon.
person Tina
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
when are going to continyou???????

A love this story !!!!!